May 27 2009
Telescopic Text
We looked at a very cool website called Telescopic Text by Joe Davis and then experimented with our own versions.
I ate lunch.
I ate lunch happily.
I ate popcorn for lunch happily.
I ate popcorn for lunch happily alone.
I ate popcorn for lunch happily alone at school.
I ate popcorn for lunch happily alone at school on Thursday.
By Drew
I ate lunch.
I ate a yucky lunch.
I slowly ate a yucky lunch.
I slowly ate a yucky lunch at school.
I slowly ate a yucky lunch at 5am at school!
I slowly ate a yucky lunch at 5am at school sadly.
Carefully, I slowly ate a yucky lunch at 5am at school sadly.
By Charlie
I ate lunch.
I ate a sandwich for lunch.
I quickly ate a sandwich for lunch.
I quickly ate an apple and some sandwiches for lunch.
By Ryan
I ate lunch.
I ate my yummy lunch.
I ate my yummy lunch slowly.
I ate my fancy, yummy lunch slowly.
Slowly, I ate my fancy, yummy lunch alone.
Slowly, I ate my fancy, 3D, yummy lunch alone.
By Tina
I ate lunch.
I ate my lunch.
I ate my lunch slowly.
I ate my lunch very slowly.
I ate my lunch very slowly with a friend.
By James
I ate lunch.
I ate lunch slowly.
I ate lunch slowly with a friend.
I ate lunch slowly with a friend at school.
I slowly ate toast for lunch with a friend at school.
By Amber
I ate lunch.
I ate a gooey lunch.
I ate a gooey, smelly lunch.
I ate a gooey, smelly lunch at 2am in the morning.
I ate a gooey, smelly lunch at 2am in the morning, on the moon.
I ate a gooey, smelly lunch at 2am in the morning, on the moon, comfortably.
By Connor
I ate lunch.
I ate my lunch.
I ate my yummy lunch.
Excitedly I ate my yummy lunch.
Excitedly I ate my yummy, scruffy lunch.
Excitedly I ate my yummy, scruffy pie for lunch.
By Ashleigh
I ate lunch.
I ate lunch beside Ryan.
I ate lunch beside Ryan outside Room 9.
I ate lunch beside Ryan, outside Room 9 slowly.
I ate lunch beside Ryan, outside Room 9, slowly on Wednesday.
By Daniel C
I ate lunch.
Sadly I ate lunch.
Sadly I ate a gooey lunch.
Sadly I ate my gooey pie for lunch.
Sadly I ate my gooey pie that was yummy for lunch.
By Ryder
I ate lunch.
I ate my lunch.
I ate my lunch sadly.
I ate my lunch sadly and alone.
Yesterday I ate my lunch sadly and alone.
Yesterday I ate my popcorn lunch sadly and alone.
By Alex
I ate lunch.
I ate my lunch.
I ate my lunch slowly.
I ate my lunch slowly at school.
I ate my lunch slowly at school at 12 o’clock.
I ate my lunch slowly at school at 12 o’clock on the deck.
I ate my lunch slowly at school at 12 o’clock on the deck with two friends.
By Libby
I ate lunch.
I slowly ate my lunch.
I slowly ate my lunch with a knife and fork.
I slowly ate my salad for lunch with a knife and fork.
I slowly ate my salad for lunch with a knife and fork alone.
I slowly ate my salad for lunch with a knife and fork alone at school.
I slowly ate my salad for lunch with a knife and fork alone at school on the stairs.
I slowly ate my salad for lunch with a knife and fork alone at school on the stairs happily.
I slowly ate my salad for lunch with a knife and fork alone at school on the stairs happily today.
By Mahina
I ate my lunch.
I ate some of my lunch.
Slowly I ate some of my lunch.
Slowly, I ate some of my pie for lunch.
By Kate
I ate lunch.
Yesterday I ate lunch.
Yesterday I ate lunch greedily.
Yesterday I ate lollies for lunch greedily.
Yesterday I ate lollies and cake for lunch greedily.
Yesterday I greedily ate a bag of lollies and cake for lunch with my friends.
Yesterday I greedily ate a gigantic bag of lollies and cake with my friends and family for lunch.
Yesterday I greedily ate a gigantic bag of lollies, pie and cakes with my friends and family for lunch.
Yesterday I greedily ate a gigantic bag of lollies, pies and cakes with my friends and family and we liked it.
Yesterday at the skate park I greedily ate a gigantic bag of lollies, pies and cakes with my friends and family and we like it.
By Ben
